4. Feedback (the event): Rob Hillier

Original zine:

  • “remove ‘top bakeries in London’ page and add title to the backpack page”
  • “spread the text evenly, left ad right on backpack page”
  • “remove ‘The Event’ on the door cover”
  • “text is to tight to image on bakery page, widen textbox”
  • “careful of text in the centre of text being lost or mismatched”

Alternative zine version:

  • “make sure you cut the distance cutout accurately”
  • “check that text is not lost between pages, break text up or space it differently”
  • “‘along Wardour Street’ text has been cut, position somewhere else”

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Response of feedback: I’ve got to check my printed pages for any printing issues as this is my last draft. This is my final draft to show to the tutors so over the weekend I will make the minor tweeks.

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