Type on the page –
Feedback for booklet (2): Everything on the right page is too far down the page, move everything up on the right page.
Take out the “-” in the titles and remove the box around the title, keep it simple and minimalistic.
Remove the boxes on the front page too.
Make the “an” and “to” bigger in font size.
Response for the booklet (2): I still do not like the front cover of the booklet, I think I will add a little colour to contrast against the black background and white text – maybe featuring the colour sequence of the contents.